Notebook Confessions Review

The scene opens with Kenzie sitting alone when she hears her stepsister Riley Anne crying in her bedroom. Kenzie goes to see what’s wrong and sits on Riley’s bed. She asks Riley what’s wrong and Riley says that her boyfriend broke up with her. Kenzie wants to know why , and Riley explains that he was always trying to have sex and Riley just never felt up to it.

Kenzie wonders aloud if maybe Riley is gay. This would explain why she never felt comfortable with intimacy. Riley dismisses this notion at first. She doesn’t believe that she is lesbian. Kenzie presses further saying that there is no way she could really know unless she gives it a chance. After all, Kenzie says that she’s been with girls herself and that there is nothing wrong with being gay. Riley lets Kenzie hug her and Kenzie offers to always be there to talk or even help her practice things with. Kenzie says that she already cares for Riley and hugs her closer.

Kenzie leans in for a first bout of kissing which brings a smile to Riley’s face. Kenzie then pulls Riley’s top down to expose her breasts and licks them softly. We get some good up close shots of Kenzie flicking stiff nipples with her tongue. Riley moans and agrees that it feels good.

Kenzie’s own top comes off and she then pulls Riley’s shorts off. Kenzie wants Riley to try and reciprocate with some boob appreciation and Riley sits up to lick and suck tits a little. Next Kenzie strips and lays Riley down and peels her stepsisters panties off. Kenzie sucks her fingers to wet them and then licks Riley’s shaved sex lightly. The heat is quickly turned up as Kenzie gets more of her mouth on muff and sucks it. She then slips fingers inside Riley and offers them back to her for a taste. Kenzie laps pussy harder, this is very well captured and also shows lovely eye contact as Kenzie looks up at Riley and tells her to let her know when she’s coming. Kenzie sucks sex until she finishes Riley and then asks if she wants to have a turn too. Riley nods and Kenzie switches spots with her.

Kenzie instructs Riley to use long firm strokes with jet tongue like ice cream , or to imagine writing poems on Kenzie’s clit. Kenzie grabs Riley’s head and gently presses herself against Riley’s outstretched tongue. I appreciate the improvised lines and the focus on how communication matters. This is also all the better because we get consistently good tongue on pussy contact shots and a mix of licking techniques. Kenzie holds her legs spread wide and she tenses , her legs shaking as she comes in Riley’s mouth. Riley rubs her face into Kenzie for increased friction and Kenzie grinds against her more for some tongue fucking. Kenzie even holds lower lips open and points out the clit to Riley. Riley keeps lapping and tongue fucking her teacher. This is fantastic stuff. Next Riley rubs her lover openhanded for a final push.

Kenzie then decides to lay down and have Riley come sit on her face and grind. This also looks good right off as we can see Kenzie’s tongue parting pink. Kenzie adds extra spit and it looks nice and wet. Kenzie nibbles clit underneath Riley and smiles up at her asking if she’s ever had her butthole licked before. Riley says no and so Kenzie takes pleasure in showing her stepsis this new sensation . Kenzie isn’t shy and rims Riley lovingly. Like so much else in this scene we get good quality camera angles as Kenzie buries her tongue in ass. Kenzie rubs Riley underhanded and penetrates vagina with her fingers her too. Riley grips her pillow and moans as she’s pleased. Kenzie adds spit and verbally encourages Riley to tell her big sister when she’s coming. Riley follows the order as she climaxes.

Kenzie then climbs on Riley’s face for a ride. To give Riley a good angle for the eating Kenzie goes to one knee and leans into the headboard of the bed for good balance and an open shot for the camera. This is really so much of what I want out of action in a scene. Kenzie’s pussy looks wonderful bouncing on Riley’s face. Kenzie ramps up her face grinding speed until she finds release. Both babes are breathing hard now after the dismount and they kiss hard.

Kenzie has one more thing she wants to show Riley and gets her permission before they set up a bouncy looking scissor trib. This is short lived but still plenty hot in my view. I love that Kenzie pulls Riley close even in the heat of the moment to stare into her eyes. They kiss with hunger as they finish up and Kenzie has successfully cheered Riley up , helping her forget all about that dumb guy.

This scene is a verified scorcher and absolutely maximizes the 33 minute runtime for all its worth. I loved it. Not a position was wasted. Meaning for me , we got sustained good camerawork for large chunks of every segment.

The cunnilingus shined on multiple occasions but my favorite has to be the prolonged pussy eating that Riley did under careful instruction by Kenzie. There are times when this instruction style work feels like just going through motions ( and if I were to criticize much here it would probably be about that tendency) . Yet , I will say that because the results were so good I didn’t mind the ‘teaching’ trope. As I said , I did like Kenzie adlibing a little when she told Riley to write a poem on her clit.

The rimming and general aggressive nature of Kenzie’s performance was another standout facet of the scene. The hard trib grind to finish things off worked well. Kenzie used the headboard well here , and in the prior faceride too. That is a little nuance and smart positioning that experience and experimentation will get you.

Finally I want to say that I really wish we got more scenes of Kenzie where her shirt and or bra comes all the way off as it did here. I don’t know if the choice to frequently shoot her scenes with her top part way on is about preserving a look of innocence or what - but I love every bit of her body and we should get to see all of it whenever possible. I get that a portion of her scenes will ask for no tattoo visible but nowadays it seems like she’s always partly covered up. Please give her some badgirl roles that allow for her tattoo to be shown, lord knows she can play naughty. If you need to go half way and cast her as the good girl corrupted that works too - heck even center a scene around the tattoo.

Riley Anne was also amazing here. I don’t know why the frequency of her appearances has gone down but ask her back ASAP if at all possible. The chemistry here was fabulous and they are prefect for taboo pairing if a sequel were ever asked of them. As for new matchups I would love to see Riley Anne with Aaliyah Love in the future. Aaliyah’s bubbly fun loving style would be great to meld with Riley. For Kenzie I would really want to see he with Girlsway fave Whitney Wright. Whitney has directed Kenzie before , and they I believe they were part of a multi girl scene but haven’t gone one on one somehow. Also , while it’s fresh in my mind , I would love to get Violet Starr and Kenzie together. This previous seemed like such a long shot because Violet hadn’t gotten to GW branded sites , but recently that has been rectified.

Overall an excellent start to the collection and a difficult scene to follow. This has incredible replay value for me being relatively short but chalk full of awesome moments.

97/100

Truth Or Dare - Chloe Cherry , Lily Love & Adria Rae

Friends Adria Rae, Chloe Cherry and Lily Love are writing down dares on scraps of paper to put in jars for a game of truth or dare. Lily is joking about how her dares are all going to be naughty and Chloe looks a little nervous.

Adria is the first to take a turn and she pulls a dare out. It is one of Chloe’s and it tells Adria to go without blinking for a whole minute. Lily and Adria think this is too tame but it does prove challenging. It is Chloe’s turn now and she chooses a truth. She claims that she has never in fact peed in a pool but her friends think she is fibbing or too naive.

Lily is last to take a turn and her dare says to bark like a dog in doggie style. Lily has no problem turning around and barking. Adria smacks her on the butt. Chloe suggests Adria pull a truth next and she gets one that asks if she has ever been with a girl. Chloe acts like this question is silly because she knows her friend isn’t ‘gay’. But Adria laughs at this and explains that a little fooling around is normal for everyone. Chloe looks unsure and she’s asked to pick a dare for her second turn. The others started with dares after all and she hasn’t taken one yet. Chloe agrees and then looks at the paper she unfolds. It says to kiss the person next to her. Chloe is nervous but she says she’s not backing out of the game. She works up her courage and kisses Adria lightly. Lily wants a turn , just to see how it feels. Again it is a small kiss and Adria and Lily are curious why Chloe says she doesn’t know how it felt.

Adria says maybe she’s just not being kissed in the right spot and she kisses Chloe’s neck. Lily adds that maybe Chloe needs to take her shirt off and get comfortable before she feels anything. Chloe is okay with this but asks why she should be the only one without her shirt on. Lily and Adria are happy to join her in undress and each friend kisses and sucks on one of Chloe’s breasts. Chloe smiles and her eyes roll in pleasure.

Adria wants more and lays Chloe down so her head is in Lily’s lap kissing her between the legs. Chloe insists she’s not gay , and Adria tells her then she has nothing to worry about. Adria moves Chloe’s pale yellow panties aside and kisses her friend’s pussy. Chloe moans and smiles saying that it feels so right. The tongue contact is okay but could be better here. Lily pinches Chloe’s nipples which elicits a sigh from Chloe who turns her head to lick at Lily’s chest. Chloe moans for Adria who licks her pussy steadily.

Adria then kisses Chloe hard on the mouth so she can taste her own pussy. Adria is quick to return to eating Chloe and she takes her panties off to get a better vantage on Chloe. Adria slips a finger inside Chloe and keeps licking her at the same time. Chloe sucks harder on Lily’s breast and then accepts a hard kiss from her. The eye contact from Chloe is nice and she squeals in delight at being licked my Adria.

Chloe decides she wants to make Adria feel good too and she gets up to lean forward where she can eat Adria out. Adria sits up on the couch back for this and Lily meanwhile slides under Chloe on the couch to taste her sex for the first time. Again, I would say the contact shots between tongue and pussy are just okay. The camera pans back to get the full view in frame. Chloe switches to fingering on Adria for a bit and the close up is somewhat improved by the time Chloe goes in for her second bout of pussy licking. Chloe feeds wet digits back to Adria and kisses her.

The trio swap positions and Lily gets up to kiss Adria while Chloe slides underneath Lily. Adria leans into the corner of the couch and lifts a leg on the armrest to give Lily an angle to lick her vagina and eventually rim her butthole. The rimming is shown nicely and Chloe stays busy eating Lily for a little while.

Another shuffle sees Adria lay down on the couch where Lily lays atop her to have both holes tastes with tongue and Chloe finds a spot to top Adria in a trib grind. Like this , Chloe and Lily are in a good position to make out some. This is somewhat busy , but the tangle looks good to me and we also get a decent close up of Adria licking Lily’s ass while gripping both cheeks and shaking her head for extra friction. Lily bounces on Adria’s face and teases Chloe while holding her gaze. Adria flicks her tongue on clit and Lily grinds into it until she finishes in climax.

Adria is pulled up to sit between her friends and they all trade kisses as they giggle happily. Adria remarks that someone’s not afraid to kiss girls anymore as she looks adoringly at Chloe. Chloe is glad to say that she not only likes it but loves it now as the scene draws to a close.

This was a good scene but not a great one in my opinion. I do like the playful style and the core idea is fine. Truth or Dare has been used in porn in the past as a hook for certain. I do appreciate the overall progression of things. Specifically that Chloe is focused on by both her friends who are attempting to open her world up sexually.

However I felt the 31 minutes allotted felt noticeably short. Maybe 5 or 6 were spent prior to any sex and so we got only in about 25 minutes of the scene proper. That is scant on both counts I think. I want more time to build up the anticipation and more time to enjoy the payoff.

I think that maybe having Adria and Lily’s characters start the kissing would have changed the pace and maybe drawn the action out longer in general. Adria’s eating skills stood out to me , but that was also do to some better camera work during her spotlights.

I also liked the final push where Adria was licking Lily and Lily was kissing Chloe whilst she in turn tribbed Adria. That is some more effective threeway positioning that doesn’t leave anyone out or feeling like an afterthought. I wish this portion of the scene had lasted longer.

It is well known that couches are not my preferred location for scenes as it makes getting the best camera angles harder and generally seems to lead to shorter sex in the end too. However this was still shot with some efficiency and the less than ideal circumstances didn’t detract too much.

Finally , I do want to say I appreciate the clear shift in attitude from Chloe’s character once she started getting licked by Adria - we hear her say that it seems wrong but feels so right and see the smile spreading across her face as she is pleased. I get that some fans want reluctant characters for longer stretches in their porn and I don’t have a problem with disagreeing on a matter of taste ; but I do like that well defined demarcation where we are no longer on shaky grounds around consent issues. I also like when the word gay is used for whatever reason. I just find it more a rousing I guess.

I believe that Adria has expressed that she will now only be doing self made content through OF and various personal platforms going forward, so make note of that and follow her there if you would like. For Chloe Cherry I would suggest a dream pairing of Karla Kush in the near future and for Lily Love I would nominate Abigail Mac when she returns to studio shoots.

91/100

Helping My Roommate - Cadey Mercury , Gina Valentina & Kenzie Reeves

Kenzie is shown eating breakfast and checking her phone when her roomie Cadey Mercury makes her way downstairs. Cadey asks what Kenzie is doing later , she sounds hopeful but Kenzie is distracted. Kenzie says she has an important test to study for. Cadey is nervous and works up some internal courage to ask Kenzie to dinner. For some reason Kenzie brushes this off hardly seeming affected and continues to talk about her study date with Gina. A deflated Cadey heads out. Something occurs to Kenzie and we see her smile.

Later on Gina is over and sitting with Kenzie on the couch. Gina says she doesn’t want to study and she and Kenzie get flirty as Cadey comes home and looks at them a little forlorn. They ask if she wants to join the study session and she declines before going into the kitchen.

Back on the couch Gina starts asking Kenzie about Cadey and it is clear they talked about her earlier. Gina is pleased and mentions how cute Cadey is, she wants to know they are going to ‘ do this or what ‘ . Kenzie nods and calls Cadey over again asking if her roommate wants to hang out with them. Kenzie pats the couch next to her and Gina starts flattering Cadey overtly. They compliment her hair and her style.

Kenzie then stands up and says that she is going to get some coffee. Cadey wants to get it for her but Kenzie insists and leaves Cadey sitting next to Gina who plans to keep flirting. Gina scoots in close and advances on Cadey brushing her knee. Cadey doesn’t know how to react and Gina gets even more direct. She says that Kenzie told her that Cadey likes girls and Gina rubs at Cadey’s crotch pushing her into the corner of the couch. Cadey starts getting worried and mentions that Gina is Kenzie’s friend and Gina replies that friends like them share everything. Gina kisses Cadey and Kenzie is off watching from a distance biting her lip.

Cadey says she doesn’t want Kenzie to catch them as Gina licks her neck and kisses her lips. Gina lays back pulling Cadey atop her in the same motion. Gina keeps kissing her curious new friend and pulls off her top. When Cadey again says that she doesn’t want to make Kenzie mad Gina makes sure that Cadey is attracted to her before she resumes kissing her. Cadey is laid on her back on the couch and Gina kisses her breasts.

Kenzie renters the main room and saunters up behind Cadey on the couch. The scheming roommate now clears her throat and Cadey covers her chest immediately claiming this isn’t what it looks like. Kenzie surprises Cadey by saying it looks like a lot of fun. Cadey apologizes and Kenzie reassures her there is nothing to be sorry for and leans in to kiss Cadey as Gina keeps kissing her neck and breasts.

Kenzie joins her friends on the couch and Cadey wants to know if they planned this the whole time. Kenzie says she only did it because she cares and then she removes her own top allowing Cadey to turn and suck her boobs. Gina kisses Cadey as Kenzie unzips her skirt and pulls it off along with Cadey’s panties. Gina starts licking Cadey’s sex and Kenzie takes her jean shorts off , lowering her pussy on Cadey’s waiting mouth. Kenzie gently teases her smitten roomie with what she wants and then lets her have it. We see some decent tongue on pussy shots that get even better when Cadey’s outstretched tongue fucks Kenzie’s slit. Kenzie looks great holding herself up on the couch corner and grinding against Cadey’s tongue. Gina keeps on licking Cadey’s vagina. Cadey soon uses fingers and an open palm to rub Kenzie harder. Kenzie comes trembling and feeds herself to Cadey. Gina then fingers Cadey , adding wetness with some spit. Kenzie assists with some extra rubbing and then Gina tops Cadey for some very hot looking tribbing. Kenzie spits in Cadey’s open mouth and then lowers her pussy on Cadey’s face again. I love this double team by Kenzie and Gina , really giving Cadey lots of attention.

Cadey eventually stands up and climbs onto the opposite corner of the couch to ride Gina’s face. Kenzie then slips down to lick Gina’s vagina. We see a good close up of this and Cadey’s butt looks fantastic as she grinds into Gina’s to tongue.

Gina sits up again and she reaches between Cadey’s legs to rub her while kissing her mouth. Kenzie reaches around to rub Cadey more at the same time before asking her to bend over on her knees. Cadey goes down on Gina and Kenzie perches herself on the couches far armrest to lean forward and rim Cadey’s ass. The camera gets a good zoomed in shot of this and Kenzie adds some extra spit to the hole. Gina gets up on her knees before Cadey and creates a chain of analingus that looks fabulous. One of the small details that I really love is seeing the pretty feet of both Gina and Cadey flexing and tensing during this. Cadey then rubs Gina fast and has her wet fingers sucked. Kenzie follows this example and rubs Cadey too. Gina flips around again with her legs spread and kisses Cadey on the lips. Kenzie keeps up the pressure rubbing Cadey underhanded. Cadey’s toes curl hard here.

Cadey is then motioned over to kiss Kenzie as Gina tastes Cadey’s butt. Positions again change when Kenzie sits on the corner of the couch and shows off her flexibility as she holds her legs up spread wide. Gina leans in to kiss her sex and it’s Cadey’s turn to bring up the rear by eating Gina from behind. Cadey uses combination licking and rubbing while Gina buries her face in Kenzie pink. Gina’s tongue strokes stretch to hit both of Kenzie’s holes though the best visual for me is Gina parting lower lips. Cadey’s rubbing gets harder and Gina switches to fingerwork on Kenzie that makes he legs shake. Gina applies pressure to clit with her thumb which seems to send Kenzie into orgasmic bliss. They kiss hard after this and Kenzie turns around putting a leg up on the arm rest to give her partners a good angle. It is Cadey who goes in with fingers and mouth on Kenzie first until she quickly slips under Kenzie to tongue fuck her. Gina leans in to help double team Kenzie by slipping a tongue in her ass. This looks great. Cadey slides a finger in pussy as Gina rims enthusiastically. Kenzie shakes as she comes and we see Cadey feed her wet fingers to Gina.

Kenzie turns but remains atop Cadey , who sticks her tongue out as Kenzie bounces on it. Gina rubs and eats Cadey. Kenzie is rubbed and licked more right over Cadey’s mouth. Cadey tries to keep Kenzie held in place even as Gina has Cadey close to coming. Gina sets up grind with Cadey and works it skillfully with hip thrusts. The position Kenzie held here looked perfect for a possible squirting shot - which they might have been hoping to trigger. Regardless , Cadey’s rubbing looked effective and Kenzie’s eyes rolled back as she came.

Next Cadey is laid back on the couch where Kenzie takes over topping her in a trib grind. It’s nice and deep looking. Cadey moans loudly in climax and Gina hungrily licks both her friends as they come apart from the grind. Kenzie shares spit with Cadey and Gina leans in to rub both other girl’s pussies at the same time.

Once more Cadey is the center of attention when Kenzie teases her and says they are going to Eiffel Tower this bitch and she climbs up on Cadey’s face for a ride. Gina sets up in a trib atop Cadey again and faces Kenzie as she picks up speed. Gina and Kenzie kiss and hold hands adorably as they dominate Cadey for a final push. When they are at last satisfied the two study buddies ask Cadey how it was. She is smiling from ear to ear and says it was great. They all agree they will be the best kind of friends as the scene fades to credits.

This was a fantastic threesome. So much of what I love about chemistry in threesomes was working here. Maybe it was thanks in part to Kenzie and Gina’s familiarity with each other as I do believe they have shot together for AGM prior to this scene.

I want to give credit to Girlsway member Bunnyman for this story pitch. Personally I love stories that have to do with crushes and or infatuation - a fact you’ll see demonstrated in the finale. I’ll elaborate on just why that is in the final breakdown. For now though , I will say that as a threeway this dynamic was perfected.

Cadey was the infatuated party and Kenzie and Gina treated her like they were there to make her fantasy come true. There are a lot of ways you can play a threesome but this is one of the best - where one star is topped by both their partners in tandem for the majority of the action. The only real downside of this approach is that it meant we did not see much of Cadey’s face during lots of the scene. Still , all my favorite parts of this were where Cadey was swarmed with love.

I also like to think of this as a sort of companion story to the earlier scene Comforting My Sister. In both Kenzie is cast as the sapphic Good Samaritan which is a part she excelled at. I don’t know if it’s just her natural sweetness but I thought it was a superb choice in both scenes. I would totally back a series around the idea of Kenzie in this recurring role. Let her comfort all the horny babes in the Girlsway universe.

Gina was also a standout star as usual. She never puts in anything but quality scenes and can match any energy that is needed for a given plot. I especially liked her trib topping moments. I would love to see Gina with Savannah Sixx or Violet Starr soon. I don’t think she’s been with either before , although I would also jump at the chance for a reunion with Kenzie.

My one regret about being so far behind on reviews is when I come upon stars who have since left the business because I know my dream pairings will be a moot point. However this still a worthwhile endeavor because I get to bask in a past performers glory and gush about how great they are. That is definitely the case with Cadey Mercury. She was wonderful in limited work for GFF alongside favorites of mine Mindi Mink & Jayden Cole and there is still one AGM scene I have yet to review. Knowing I won’t get to see her do stud on shoots might be a bummer but I can say I own all of her Girlsway and Girlfriends output and that counts for something in my book. Her Twitter says she’s permanently retired so I’ll take her word on that and be glad for what I got to witness. Still , if a genie granted me one more g/g Cadey scene I think I might pick Vanna Bardot for her partner.

This scene was very good and difficult to nitpick. At a healthy 46 minute length there was time for story and a good bit of sex. I think that in the end the only thing I would want is some more up close cunnilingus shots or for certain positions to have lasted longer. All told , a memorable threeway and one that I’ll definitely return to when I’m missing Cadey on my screen.

96/100

Notebook Confessions - Kristen Scott & Elsa Jean

The titular scene opens with Kristen Scott sitting in the library writing poetry for their crush , librarian Elsa Jean. Kristen finishes writing and looks wistfully off into the distance when they are startled by Elsa entering the room to restock shelves. We see Kristen clutch the book of poetry and slowly rise to leave. But flustered and nervous Kristen rushes toward the door and collides with Elsa. Books are dropped and Elsa turns to speak to Kristen and ask the time. Kristen stumbles over what to say and instead ends up running away in a huff. Elsa turns back to the half cleaned mess and finds Kristen’s notebook. The camera zooms in on Elsa opening the notebook and discovering what’s inside.

Later that evening Kristen calls about their lost book and is told that no one has turned it into the desk. Just then there is a knock at the door and Elsa enters holding the little black book behind her back. Kristen is startled by the arrival of their crush in the house but tries to remain calm enough to greet Elsa.

Elsa is quick to reveal what she found and Kristen is scared to ask if Elsa read anything. Elsa admits that she did , and that’s how she found Kristen’s address. Kristen stutters a bit when Elsa says she loves the poems and wants to know if they were about her. Kris’s first thought is to deflect but Elsa asserts again that she thinks it’s really special and brushes back Kristen’s hair. Elsa knows they are all about her of course , because her name is in them.

Elsa takes it upon herself to take the initiative with the smitten and shy poet. Elsa tells Kristen that they are beautiful and that she is so happy that she found out. The two kiss for the first time which makes Kristen laugh a little out of excitement and nerves. The makeout gets more intense. Kris sits down on the couch first and still can’t believe this is happening. Elsa brushes off this notion that Kristen has by kissing them harder. Hands start to wonder here and Kristen feels Elsa’s breasts through her shirt. The couple share more sweet smiles and Elsa seems to like that Kris is so noticeably shy.

I like the image of clasped hands during the kissing. Elsa wants to thank Kristen again for the poems and Kris is flattered. Elsa says she would love to read more now that they know each other like this. The kissing continues and Kristen’s shirt is pulled off. Elsa’s top is not far behind and Kris cups Elsa’s tits , gently feeling the stiffening nipples. Elsa wants to reciprocate with similar attention and does as soon as Kristen’s bra is out of the way. The vast majority of this is still dominated by kissing and soft sweet sighs.

Kris sets their glasses aside and moves closer to Elsa. Elsa pulls Kristen’s shorts down rubbing over Kris’ underwear and placing small kisses on their back before moving lower to kiss butt. Elsa makes lovely eye contact during this bit of teasing. She rubs Kris between the legs and then pulls the pink undies all the way off. The camera gets a good shot of the initial tongue on pussy contact and Elsa laps her new lover from behind. We see some good twitchy tongue movement here as Elsa eats Kris making them shiver in response. Kris tenses in orgasm and moans for Elsa , rocking against her mouth short of breath.

Kris then turns around to kiss Elsa again and share in the taste on Elsa’s lips. Elsa allows Kristen to back her up on the couch and Kris leans in to suck on Elsa’s pert boobs. Kris flicks nipple with both fingers and tongue to tease their lover. They then help Elsa with taking off her pink shoes before returning to the makeout. Kris kisses Elsa over her panties. Kristen goes slow teasing Elsa with slow and sensual licks. I love the close up and the eye contact. Elsa clutches at her chest and throws her head back in pleasure watching Kris pull lower lips with determination. It all sounds nice and wet and Elsa removes her panties fully allowing Kristen to get a face full of sex. Kris really knows how to clamp down on clit and suck with conviction. Elsa Jean is almost purring with delight as she finds release and then sits up to meet Kristen with more kisses.

Elsa wants a turn and Kris lays back on the other end of the couch legs spread. Elsa kisses thussy and gives hard tongue flicks before looking to suck clit herself. Kristen tenses and shakes coming hard and vibrating with orgasmic jolts. This is a sight that never fails to work for me as a viewer. You just can’t fake that kind of bodily response and so when you witness it you know you’ve got something genuine and lovey.

Kristen isn’t done yet and wants more of Elsa. They have her lay down and then Kris tops Elsa in a 69. Right off the bat the camera gets good up close looks at both babes licking pink. The eating by Elsa looks especially tasty in this position and sounds wet. Kris laps their lover with insistence and seems bring out another climax from Elsa. I love seeing the way Elsa’s toes curled from pleasure when she finished.

Elsa sits up and the couple kiss before Kris sets up a scissor trib. The grind is good and bouncy , gaining steam with haste. As with so much of this scene what gave it that extra spark of intimacy was the continued eye contact and kissing throughout. Kris is driven to another shuddering orgasm and tells Elsa that she is pure magic as they catch their breath.

Kristen wants to know what this means for them tomorrow at school and Elsa makes them glow with happiness again when she says hopefully you’ll write me another poem and the scene fades to credits.

I loved this scene from start to finish ; but I admit that I am biased towards this seeing as it was not only my story pitch - but also the first one Girlsway ever produced. Add to that thrill the fact that I had even requested Kris for the part and you’ll understand why I felt I had hit the lottery with the pitch.

I had initially wanted them for the part because Kris has such amazing eyes and when I thought of the story at first it was inspired in part by the image of them gazing wistfully at an unattainable crush. The pitch also owes some love to Elvis Costello’s song Everyday I Write The Book ; as it was the song that gave me the first seed of the plot. Getting Elsa Jean was also a stroke of incredible luck. Not only is she dynamite in pretty much any scene but she has a sweetness about her personality that makes me believe she would not only be someone’s crush but that she might also be understanding enough to at least let a lovestruck poet down easy if not fall love.

Because this is already a self indulgent review , the breakdown might be a little different than usual. I still want to give props to both stars die delivering a smash hit - and say that the two things I value most in lesbian scenes were on point the whole way. That being passionate kissing and high quality cunnilingus. That alone will almost always get my stamp of approval as a fan.

But let me expand a bit and explain why this was such a great adaptation of what I asked for. I’ve already mentioned in this review ( scene 3 ) that infatuation is a facet of romance story telling I think is sadly under utilized in porn. I dunno if maybe some fans find it over the top or even a little sappy. I guess I can understand a criticism like that; however I think that infatuation or intense crushes offer an opportunity to switch the dynamic up a bit. So often we see LGBT stories that are tinged with some form of reluctance and sex is then supposed to be negotiated by the characters. In this scene I wanted for both parties to be invested from the start of the sexual not be slowly ‘ coming around ‘.

There was still the element of Kris as the angsty writer being nervous around Elsa who they pined for - an angle that was masterfully played by the way. Yet , I also thought it was important to show Elsa’s character as moved by the poetry. This is obviously a fantasy any poet has some familiarity with. ( a thing I would know , but also guessed that it would resonate with the Girlsway fans who also write pitches). In some ways it was the most meta fantasy I ever pitched and so when it got chosen for production I was ecstatic. Even with all that expectation and anticipation riding on it I still think it came out as near to what I dreamed it could be. I often complain about couches , and I’d be lying if I said I didn’t wish this were on a bed. But 46 minutes full of grade a kissing and pussy eating is hard to beat in any circumstance.

Member fantasies may have been cut by Girlsway - but if anyone with pull is reading this I would hope they understand what a special experience it can be for us fans to see our ideas brought to life on screen. This truly was everything I wanted it to be and more. If direct pitches never come back I do hope that we at least see more stories that aim for this kind of feel good romance and capitalize on the feverishly sexy energy of the hopelessly infatuated. It seems almost unbelievable that so little porn is made in homage to romantic love these days. Please give us more like this in the future.

As for future pairings I would love to see Kris paired with Bunny Colby and Elsa Jean matched up with Laney Grey. I believe that the two pairs would have electric chemistry.

My personal stakes in this scene might lead one to believe I inflated the score - and maybe I did , but I would tell any fan of sweet romance and tender sex to watch this and decide for themselves. Getting this scene greenlit for production was one of my proudest moments as a creative person and I say that knowing it might sound ludicrous to an audience on the internet. Fuck it though , too happy that this exists and it all started in my head.

98/100

Total Grade Average = 95.5 ( rounded up) to 96% or A+

Final Thoughts and Suggestions :

This is a fantastic collection from Web Young bookended by two absolute bangers. I think that the stories in scenes 3 and 4 were especially good. Obviously an MVP award would go to Kenzie Reeves for giving two great performances but you already know by now that the title scene is what I’ll always remember about this release. I’d viewed that scene as much as anything across all of Girlsway but to get the perspective of the movie as a whole I feel even more humbled to have my first ever story pitch appear alongside such a lineup.